I did change a tiny bit about the whole Monetization part. And also a bit of the Redistribution Part, to only prohibit disallowing sharing for free, you can still tell people to not use your Mod for making Money off of it.
In fact I will likely add some boolean Flag for Modders to determine the permission of monetized usage of their Mod in a Modpack easily. (Server Owners are a different thing, access to a Server can always be monetized regardless of this)
Most Core Engine things I do, will permit paid redistribution, though I have just a few less important things in mind where I would not permit it. (mainly Story Stuff, when I do add it later on)